爆裂服规则英文稿！

brucewoo

在公司加班物料，捣鼓了一下爆裂服规则的英文稿。
翻译时对规则作了同义合并或一点节略。
由于水平有限，以及对规则未能了解透彻，因此先在这里贴上来，征求一下大家的意见：

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以下为爆裂服规则英文稿：
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★        General
1.        Any modifications to ER MOD/game files or using hook programs will be regarded as cheating.
2.        Utilizing any bugs was forbidden.
3.        PVP was forbidden in the capitals (New York, New Berlin, New London, New Tokyo)
4.        You can not attack the player who is docking or launching.
5.        Make sure you have less than 20 pieces of dismounted equipment in you cargo, or they will be lost.
★        Protections for newbies
1.        Players under the level of 50 grades will be regarded as newbies and protected.
2.        You can NOT engage any newbies. (Except for PVP agreed by both sides)
3.        Newbies can NOT engage with other players. (Except for PVP agreed by both sides)
★        RPG (Role playing) rules
1.        Player will be named automatically as member of a certain party as he gets high enough reputation. It is the RPG character of player. You can type “/list” in public chat channel to view the naming of all players online.
2.        Xeno and Corsair were regarded as “Illegal forces”. The other parties are “Legal forces”.
3.        Players respectively belong to Illegal forces and Legal forces can engage with each other. (except for the circumstance of “Protections for newbie” )
4.        Players of Legal forces can not engage with each other(Except for PVP agreed by both sides)
5.        Players of Illegal forces have the right of robbery on any other players above 50 grades.
★        Clans
1.        Clan is a special RPG entity, manually defined by server administrator. There are 2 classes of Clans.
2.        Clan is acquiescently legal force.
3.        Class-1 Clan owns one space station as headquarter. The galaxy of the headquarter will be regarded as the domain of the Clan. The Clan has right to levy taxes on other players pass by, and attack those refused to pay taxes. (except for the circumstance of “Protections for newbie” )
4.        Galaxies within two jumps from the domain are also the orbit of the Clan. The Clan has the right to use the resources with priority.
5.        Class-2 Clans can not own any domain.
6.        Players of Clans can not assemble to enter the domain of other Clans without permission. Otherwise it will be regarded as invasion and those players will be engaged.
★        Excessive engage
1.        You can not shot down the same player more than 6 times within 24 hours.
2.        You can not badger with the attacker after being shot down for 6 times.
3.        PVP agreed by both sides is unlimited.

[ 本帖最后由 brucewoo 于 2008-7-28 02:52 编辑 ]

HuNtER

很好很强大

HuNtER

e文好得来看看，没问题的话发到国际区

EvilAngel

太牛了

wangyan43

搞得很不错。

cooler

可惜英文不好，好在老婆是英语老师，可以取长补短。
顶一个

HuNtER

原帖由 cooler 于 2008-7-29 12:48 发表
可惜英文不好，好在老婆是英语老师，可以取长补短。
顶一个

请咱英语老师给对照看看，没问题发国际区呵呵

黑暗枪骑兵

★l        General
1.        Any modifications on ER MOD/game files or using any other mod or hook programs will be regarded as cheating/hacking.
2.        Use any bugs in game is forbidden.
3.        PVP is forbidden in the capitals (New York, New Berlin, New London, New Tokyo)
4.        You can not attack the player who is docking or launching.
5.        Make sure you have less than 20 dismounted equipments in you cargo, or they will be lost.

★        Protections for new players
1.        Players under the level of 50 grades will be regarded as new player and protect by the server.
2.        You can NOT engage any new players. (Except for PVP agreed by both sides)
3.        New players can NOT engage with other players. (Except for PVP agreed by both sides)

★        RPG (Role playing) rules
1.        Player will be named automatically as member of a certain party as he gets high enough reputation. It is the RPG character of player. You can type “/list” in public chat channel to view the naming of all players online.
2.        Xeno and Corsair and other forces like that are consider as “Illegal forces”. The other parties are “Legal forces”.
3.        Players respectively belong to Illegal forces and Legal forces can engage with each other. (except for the circumstance of “Protections of new players” )
4.        Players of Legal forces can not engage with each other(Except for PVP agreed by both sides)
5.        Players of Illegal forces have the right of robbery on any other players above 50 grades.

★        Clans
1.        Clan is a special RPG entity, manually defined by server administrator. There are 2 classes of Clans.
2.        Clan is acquiescently legal force.
3.        Class-1 Clan owns one space station as headquarter. The galaxy of the headquarter will be regarded as the domain of the Clan. The Clan has right to collect taxes on other players if they pass by, and attack those refused to pay taxes. (except for the circumstance of “Protections of new players” )
4.        Galaxies within two jumps from the domain are also the orbit of the Clan. The Clan has the right to use the resources with priority.
5.        Class-2 Clans can not own any domain.
6.        Players of Clans can not enter other Clan's domain without permission. Otherwise it will be regarded as invasion and those players will be consider as hostile.

★        Re-engage
1.        You can not shot down the same player more than 6 times within 24 hours.
2.        You can not annoy the attacker after being shot down 6 times.
3.        PVP agreed by both sides is unlimited.


做了一点修改

[ 本帖最后由 黑暗枪骑兵 于 2008-7-29 08:20 编辑 ]

brucewoo

经黑暗的修改已近乎完美，和原稿再综合了一下，应该可以公布了。

新的一些细微修改以蓝色标出：

★l        General
1.        Any modifications on ER MOD/game files or using any other mod or hook programs will be regarded as cheating/hacking.
2.        Use any bugs in game is forbidden.
3.        PVP is forbidden in the capitals (New York, New Berlin, New London, New Tokyo)
4.        You can not attack the player who is docking or launching.
5.        Make sure you have less than 20 dismounted equipments in you cargo, or they will be lost.

★        Protections for new players
1.        Players under the level of 50 grades will be regarded as new player and protected by the server.
2.        You can NOT engage any new players. (Except for PVP agreed by both sides)
3.        New players can NOT engage with other players. (Except for PVP agreed by both sides)

★        RPG (Role playing) rules
1.        Player will be named automatically as member of a certain party as he gets high enough reputation. It is the RPG character of player. You can type “/list” in public chat channel to view the naming of all players online.
2.        Xeno and Corsair and other forces like that are considered as “Illegal forces”. The other parties are “Legal forces”.
3.        Players respectively belong to Illegal forces and Legal forces are allowed to engage with each other. (except for the circumstance of “Protections of new players” )
4.        Players of Legal forces can not engage with each other(Except for PVP agreed by both sides)
5.        Players of Illegal forces have the right of robbery on any other players above 50 grades.

★        Clans
1.        Clan is a special RPG entity, manually defined by server administrator. There are 2 classes of Clans.
2.        Clan is acquiescently legal force.
3.        Class-1 Clan owns one space station as headquarter. The galaxy of the headquarter will be regarded as the domain of the Clan. The Clan has right to collect taxes on other players if they pass by, and attack those refused to pay taxes. (except for the circumstance of “Protections of new players” )
4.        Galaxies within two jumps from the domain are also the orbit of the Clan. The Clan has the right to use the resources with priority.
5.        Class-2 Clans can not own any domain.
6.        Players of Clans can not assemble to enter (这里还是按原稿，强调不能集结进入)other Clan's domain without permission. Otherwise it will be regarded as invasion and those players will be considered as hostile.

★        Re-engage
1.        You can not shot down the same player more than 6 times within 24 hours.
2.        You can not annoy the attacker after being shot down 6 times.
3.        PVP agreed by both sides is unlimited.

[ 本帖最后由 brucewoo 于 2008-7-29 21:49 编辑 ]

LordTheSavior

我感觉差好多。。。改了一下，你们看看吧。。。

★l        General
1.        Any modifications on ER MOD/game files or using any other mod or hook programs will be regarded as cheating/hacking.（感觉写复杂了，我换一句看看： No moding, no cheating, please keep your game data clean)
2.        Using any bugs in game is forbidden.（语法错误，use换成using（我再加一句： If you find any bugs, please report it immediately）
3.        PVP is forbidden in the capital systems(New York, New Berlin, New London, New Tokyo) （不通顺， capitals换成capital systems）
4.        You can not attack the player who is docking or launching.（感觉怎么这么别扭。。。我来一句吧： Attacking the player who is docking or launching is not allowed）
5.        Make sure you have less than 20 unmounted equipments in you cargo, or they will be lost. （dismounted不对， 换成unmounted）

★        Protections for newbies（不能叫 new players，要用newbies）
1.        Players under level 50 will be regarded as newbie and protected by the following rules. （grades？？？？删掉the level of 50 grades 加上level50）（server换成following rules ）
2.        You can NOT engage any new players. (Except for PVP agreed by both sides) （还是一样。。。我来一句吧： Engaging newbies is not allowed except for self-defence）
3.        New players can NOT engage with other players. (Except for PVP agreed by both sides)
（这条比较郁闷， 我来换换：Newbies who attack other players will not be protected by the rules）

★        RPG (Role playing) rules
1.        Player will be named automatically as member of a certain party as he gets good enough（应该是good enough 吧） reputation. It is the RPG character of player. （这句什么意思？？？没看懂， 是不是: Characters that have name-tags will be treated as a Role-play character.）You can type “/list” in public chat channel to view the naming（name-tags????） of all players online.
2.        Xenos and Corsairs（这里变复数念起来舒服些） and all （加个all，和后面的like that搭配）other forces like that are considered as “Illegal forces”. The other parties（应该是faction吧。。。） are “Legal forces”.
3.        Players respectively belong to Illegal forces or （and换成or）legal（legal不用开头大写） forces are allowed （还是不通顺are allowed换成have the rights）to engage with each other. (except for the circumstance of “Protections of new players” )
4.        Players of legal forces can not engage with each other(Except for PVP agreed by both sides)
5.        Players of illegal（开头不大写） forces have the right of robbery on any other players above 50 grades.

★        Clans
1.        Clan is a special RPG entity, manually defined by server administrators（加S）. There are 2 classes of Clans.
2.        Clan is acquiescently legal force.
3.        Class-1 Clan owns one space station as headquarter. The galaxy of the headquarter will be regarded as the domain of the Clan. The Clan has right to collect taxes on other players if they pass by, and attack those refused to pay taxes. (except for the circumstance of “Protections of new players” )
4.        Galaxies within two jumps from the domain are also the orbit of the Clan. The Clan has the right to use the resources with priority.
5.        Class-2 Clans can not own any domain.
6.        Players of Clans can not assemble to enter (这里还是按原稿，强调不能集结进入)other Clan's domain without permission. Otherwise it will be regarded as invasion and those players will be considered as hostile.
（所有的clan都要加s。。。不然clan会被理解成一个叫clan的组织）

★        Re-engage
1.        You can not shot down the same player more than 6 times within 24 hours.
2.        You can not annoy the attacker after being shot down 6 times.
3.        PVP agreed by both sides is unlimited.

[ 本帖最后由 LordTheSavior 于 2008-7-29 23:23 编辑 ]