这里也发一次，各位外语达人有空的话帮我下

9sun

貌似这里的外语达人的更多些
各位达人麻烦看看被我用[[[ ]]]框住的这部分如何翻译才好。
看上去很多很恐怖，其实这里才4句而已……  

Have you heard about the artifact ban? Jacobi can pretend like there’s some security concern, but in the end it's all about Liberty getting their cut of a market they've been dying to get into. [[[If they make it a controlled substance - and then later tax the hell out of it - they'll get their chance.]]]


[[[Say whatever you want about its methods or politics, but the navy is an impressive organization.]]] They have tracked down just about all of the survivors from Freeport 7. Last report was that a patrol tracked down a man named Brandon Rowlett. He tried to flee, but these navy pilots are among the very best here in Liberty. He never had a chance.


There’s something strange going on in both the navy and the LSF. [[[I’m hearing rumors about a bunch of people that are either reassigned or simply removed from their posts.]]] It’s not like High Command to do things so under-handedly. It might have something to do with a traitor they’ve been trying to weed out lately.  

I can’t believe Rheinland has reached this far into California. Just what are they thinking? [[[[Certainly President Jacobi won’t stand for this, but the way the Senate is, it would take days for them to actually decide on any recourse.]]]]

另，CO是什么?
Our CO said that we are to round up anyone who was on Freeport 7. There’s a colony-wide search going on right now.  



另外，旅行啊，这种中间有东西而我又不知道是什么的部分如何翻译？
I have a friend who’s a private on the battleship </TEXT><TRA data="2" mask="2" def="-3"/><TEXT>Independence</TEXT><TRA data="0" mask="2" def="-1"/><TEXT>. Apparently, not too long ago the captain of the ship was found dead. The strange part was that an autopsy revealed she was missing her heart and brain! Can you believe that?</TEXT><PARA/><POP/></RDL>




其实还有很多的……但是一次发太多了估计就没有人有耐性帮忙了……断网后翻译的进度比我想象的慢的多……

zs7779

这是关于什么的？

Euyis

去贴吧....

vikingsail

Have you heard about the artifact ban? Jacobi can pretend like there’s some security concern, but in the end it's all about Liberty getting their cut of a market they've been dying to get into. If they make it a controlled substance - and then later tax the hell out of it - they'll get their chance.
你听说关于伪禁令的事了吗?Jacobi装作是关于安全问题,但实际上Liberty正在失去他们辛辛苦苦拼了命才得到的市场.
当然,如果他们对此进行控制,然后在[文明用语]对其进行收税,这样的话他们就可以得到机会了.
(最后一句由语境决定其意思)

Say whatever you want about its methods or politics, but the navy is an impressive organization.
无论你怎么评价海军做事的方法或者政策,但海军确实是一个令人敬畏的组织.

I’m hearing rumors about a bunch of people that are either reassigned or simply removed from their posts.
我听说有传言说有一些人可能是被重新委派了也有可能就直接从他们的岗位上被撤职.

Certainly President Jacobi won’t stand for this, but the way the Senate is, it would take days for them to actually decide on any recourse.
当然,Jacobi总统不会这样主张,但是以参议院的方式,要花几天的时间才能在实质上定下解决问题的方案.

CO:commanding officer 指挥官
Our CO said that we are to round up anyone who was on Freeport 7. There’s a colony-wide search going on right now.
我们的上司说我们将对曾在FreePort7上的每一个人进行围捕.目前,一个整个殖民地范围的搜寻正在进行中.

I have a friend who’s a private on the battleship Independence. Apparently, not too long ago the captain of the ship was found dead. The strange part was that an autopsy revealed she was missing her heart and brain! Can you believe that?
我有一个朋友工作在Independence号战舰上,是一个士兵.
前不久这艘战舰的船长死了,可是奇怪的是尸检报告证明她的心脏和大脑没了!你能相信吗?

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这是我的翻译,呵呵,有些地方也不太确定.
大家来讨论一下看有什么不准确的地方没.

vikingsail

没有人讨论么........................................

neo

翻译的挺好，不用讨论了。。

neo

这种中间有东西而我又不知道是什么的部分如何翻译？
I have a friend who’s a private on the battleship </TEXT><TRA data="2" mask="2" def="-3"/><TEXT>Independence</TEXT><TRA data="0" mask="2" def="-1"/><TEXT>. Apparently, not too long ago the captain of the ship was found dead. The strange part was that an autopsy revealed she was missing her heart and brain! Can you believe that?</TEXT><PARA/><POP/></RDL>

</TEXT><TRA data="2" mask="2" def="-3"/><TEXT>是xml格式符。翻译<...>外面的。

9sun

谢谢了，虽然还有点小问题……vikingsail翻译的不错。这个是Freelancer的传闻中的几条。就两位翻译的结果来看，我对第一条的理解还真是有问题滴………
Euyis 的翻译也不错，很有启发性，我决定部分参考参考这种风格，可以很方便的解决某些问题……
再次感谢……